@ rishzzz, thanks a lot for your assessment. What do you mean by a beginner level?
- Should the language be improved? how? by using literary words?
- Should substance be replaced with some examples, quotes? How to better equip this introduction with such material? one example may be.
I am afraid that using more difficult words or changed style of portraying my thoughts would hinder my natural way of responding to a queries or building up an argument. What do you suggest?

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