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Old Monday, April 23, 2012
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Well, another awesome poem.. the transition from human love to divine love.. isn't it?
yes,it is...

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(Alliterative Poem)

"Modern Man"

Dwelling in the delirious depths of desire

Man's soul has sold its sense and sagacity.

The cravings have crumpled the creeds of culture

Wisdom; waste and man; wild vulture.

Formidable frivolities found in fusty faces, for

The longings and lust runs through races...
your poems have universal approach and like this ..it too,has objective approach
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