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SADIA SHAFIQ · #11 Thursday, March 29, 2012

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Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Quite well and out-standing these are.

Here is one of mine for you.

A THOUGHT!

He thought and universe been,
All is thought which is seen.
One who strays, so ever fails,
ALLAH is fact, nothing else.
And way is one so go right,
With eternity we will unite.
All other thoughts do kill,
Think him, love in heart do fill.
He is the one and all alone,
And bears not nor is born.
He poured light in the soul,
Leave body go for soul’s goal.
In his love come, let’s do sink,
In thought’s depth do think.
Ah! On page tears now fall!
A soul weeps for beloved’s call,
Left nest like a wanderer bird,
Eyes are misty for my beloved.
In mine soul is hidden HE!
For you dear, only I ever knee.
I weep a lot and I cannot sleep,
Oh! My love, to me once you peep.
With you when I will meet,
I bow and fall at your feet.
My misty eyes seek you, dear!
Tears in eyes are, come near.
In sighs and breathes you are,
I feel you nearer being very far.
Soul becomes eternal, I faith,
DEATH BEFORE DEATH!

By Zuhaib THE TRAVELLER

If these are your true feelings then I envy with you .One has to sacrifice his/her own for Love .I had poured such stuff onto my diary when i was in 2nd year (2004-05) .but Allah Always judge our feelings .it is excellent but careful for your exam

you are born poet and one day you will get fame just because of your true love .MAY ALLAH blesss you ...amen!!

SADIA SHAFIQ · #12 Thursday, March 29, 2012

I am the present girl ,
Like diamond or pearl,
Live in ye wonderland,
I live in the fairyland.

Once mine particles touched you,
With gentle ruthlessness and you,
And I embraced thine-love.

Silver light gold me ,
And ,the heart snoozed me,
Your reflection in ye;
Burnt and smoked ye;
Squeezed the pumping and ye,

Fell in love and ye;
Died you,me survived.
Love is infallible passion,
No decree for its cessation,

The blending of light and soil,
Convert öne's into purified soil,
When love for material boils,
Then bending of each joint foiled-you and me.

What a marvel of soil and light did!
I am not the light nor can feel soil.
Perhaps, it is not your folly,
Me was in jolly.
This mirth is ironical,
That 's the life`s chronicle.

The passing for love never ends.
You will never regret till not quenched.

SADIA SHAFIQ · #13 Monday, April 16, 2012

The broken world of mountain.

Writing poems needs deep observation or emotions. The change in the institutions also change the writing style;people tend to subjective.I want to write to bring change.

Centuries long the theme of gender was created.
One attributed mountained gender which had created rest.

The "KUN"spell made the Amar (the universe)
That spell dramatically work as "FA-YAKOON"
The journey of both sexes went on.
The blame game then starts.
O'You Evil spirit,
You seduced Adam,
You lured Abraham,
You drive Yousaf.

The love derivation from ribs of man,
Thy passion of man labelled them satan.

O'man you are infalliable,
Only wömen have satanic- capable
You have loves and later has love

When saif ul mulook desolated,
Badi-ul-jamal was'nt to be blamed.
When farhad had built milk rivers.
Both engraved together ;a permanent sleep.
The classic love skied by both,
When ribs join with dust of soul.
Marium cellebacy excluded thematic connotation;
The denotation now seems to be dummies.

Now, the world have machines.
They neither love nor hate.
The have lust ;beasty passion
Now, the world is with paintings and writing.
Real love exist there .

Arslan Shaukat · #14 Tuesday, April 17, 2012

O my angel, how can I, get to fly

Let me have the taste of clouds and feel the sky

In this world, I have learnt, so many evils

My thoughts are polluted, my heart is blackened,

These are the things that made me pry,

Tell me how can I get those dry,

O my angel,

I am lonely, in this world, no body can hear my cry

Tell my angel, how can I, get to fly!

Arslan Shaukat · #15 Friday, April 20, 2012

Because angel on the left side would not guide us to the right. Hope you got my point. :-)

Da Skeptic · #16 Sunday, April 22, 2012

Well, dear, Here is another poem of mine, written about a year ago..

“Desolation”

What sullenness your thoughts bring to me,

What tears accompany your image!

I am a bird left behind from the flock,

And run for water to the mirage.

My head is bent before your divine feet,

Like the arched bow of solitary moon.

O the pearl of my desolate heart!

I want a glimpse of you for my heart’s boon.

Safeer Hussain Saffi..

SADIA SHAFIQ · #17 Monday, April 23, 2012

I was left !
The desires ridiculing over me.
Covert aversion smashing the broken themes.

I was left,
When Time needs nothing but gains,
The profane become sane.
And ashes burnts smocked.

Ah! I was left ,
Without no choices,
Incompetence pleasure,
Impotent rebukes,
Left with nothing.

When time regained ,
Nothing was maintained,
No respect entertained,
With harsh words,
I was left.

If ,i am left ,
I am not afraid;
Already left,
Loose already

No desires,
Painless drops,
Crunched heart,
And ruined fate,
I was left.

If left, then i also left!
Thy world and all.
All pains engraving in it;
Littered it into heart.
I was left.

If left, then i have another treasure too.
And HE never let me go.
Catch me at every critical juncture.
I am not left because HE did not left me.

If left, then blessed!
No care,
No pains,
I am insane with HIM.
O'me loard thanx for being in me

SADIA SHAFIQ · #18 Monday, April 23, 2012

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Originally Posted by Da Skeptic

@Sadia
Well, another awesome poem.. the transition from human love to divine love.. isn't it?

yes,it is...

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Originally Posted by Da Skeptic

(Alliterative Poem)

"Modern Man"

Dwelling in the delirious depths of desire

Man's soul has sold its sense and sagacity.

The cravings have crumpled the creeds of culture

Wisdom; waste and man; wild vulture.

Formidable frivolities found in fusty faces, for

The longings and lust runs through races...

your poems have universal approach and like this ..it too,has objective approach

Da Skeptic · #19 Tuesday, April 24, 2012

“Shrine”

When loneliness gets more lonely,

When I become I and you, you only,

Sounds of the departing steps,

Echo in the lonely depths,

Of my and my only loneliness..

When I behold the solitary moon,

And see her light spraying ashes,

My loneliness resonates with hers,

And I cry unto the pale grown moon,

Lo! I have resigned and taken refuge,

In the shrine of thy Holy loneliness..

Have mercy and erect my grave,

By the burning ashes of thy sacred shrine..

Safeer Hussain Saffi..

Da Skeptic · #20 Tuesday, April 24, 2012

[written right now, while sitting on the net..]

I am the dweller of the vale of woe

I am the veil and I am the show..

I am the traveler of the road to misery,

With me, Tears, Pains and Failures accompany..

I am the wound that never heals,

I am the worm that crawls and kneels,

I am the passions' fast friend,

I am for sale, buy me or lend..

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