Few minor things, as i have told you that you will have to check for the things yourself.

You love to get into the past and generally ignore the present at the same time.

You love to quote rome and persia, which is good but at the cost of those .....?

You love philosophies, you love to quote Ghandi and rumi in your texts but nothing about Muhammad PBUH, Umar, Ali,

iqbal, sir syed, Khushal, Rehman, liauqat.. You want me to tell more?


Present is Present, try to live in it, own it and its all that you have. Past was experience, Future is unknown but Present is what you have. Its a gift. ALL essays and expressions points towards present.