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Do Check it ASIF3531. I have written day before yesterday. None has checked it. Check it as you say about fantasies and realities. I shall have another way to write on. Thanks

Pearlys, you must check it too.
sir, your paragraph is the best one , it is enough to take good marks in exam, but we all are well about our competition, keep it up you possess extra ordinary skills of writing, best of luck...
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Sir, I have checked all your posts, even i have checked your sentence corrections posts. I acknowledged and appreciated your initiative. You have good writing skills. BUT i was successful in figuring out few things related to your style and the stuff you have in your head. I am not criticizing you, as you have good english skills but it doesnt mean you are creative too.


You have to search for those things and correct it on time. As everything has a cost and nothing is free.
Dear, Just POINT OUT THOSE FANTASIES AND IMAGINARY THINGS?

I am waiting, find them out and post here.
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sir, your paragraph is the best one , it is enough to take good marks in exam, but we all are well about our competition, keep it up you possess extra ordinary skills of writing, best of luck...
Hey, Don't Call me SIR. I am much younger to You. And, I have just cleared my Intermediate. So, just preparing and learning. And, you gonna Rock On. You will win, indeed. I am damn sure.

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Few minor things, as i have told you that you will have to check for the things yourself.

You love to get into the past and generally ignore the present at the same time.

You love to quote rome and persia, which is good but at the cost of those .....?

You love philosophies, you love to quote Ghandi and rumi in your texts but nothing about Muhammad PBUH, Umar, Ali,

iqbal, sir syed, Khushal, Rehman, liauqat.. You want me to tell more?


Present is Present, try to live in it, own it and its all that you have. Past was experience, Future is unknown but Present is what you have. Its a gift. ALL essays and expressions points towards present.
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few minor things, as i have told you that you will have to check for the things yourself.

You love to get into the past and generally ignore the present at the same time.

You love to quote rome and persia, which is good but at the cost of those .....?

you love philosophies, you love to quote ghandi and rumi in your texts but nothing about muhammad pbuh, umar, ali,

iqbal, sir syed, khushal, rehman, liauqat.. You want me to tell more?


Present is present, try to live in it, own it and its all that you have. Past was experience, future is unknown but present is what you have. Its a gift. All essays and expressions points towards present.

haha!

A senior can reply it well.
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Those were the minor suggestions and about your writing style, anyone one can tell you about its "Originality".

"Brevity is the soul of wit". An awesome Saying.

I shall stop here now
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Call no Man Happy till he is Dead.

Until and Unless, man lives in this materialistic and greedy world, he cannot be Happy. Man is shackled and chained in this magical world. Adam and eve were thrown on earth for punishment. Earth was considered a jail for them. So, how can a man live happily in a jail? Man can be happy when he is freed of the shackles.

Change is constant. If spring comes; flowers bloom up. When autumn enters, flowers wither. A man cannot be happy, even if he has health, wealth and all luxuries of life. In the book, Prince of Abyssinia, by Samuel Johnson. Rasselas, the prince, had everything of world. But, he could not live happily in his palace. He left his palace and tried to find and explore happiness in world. And, He could find nowhere.

Man lives, expects, desires, feels panic and tragedies, never lives happily. Life is nevertheless a tragedy. Hazrat ALi A.S said, "Oh! World, I have divorced you for three times." Until and unless, man desires, he cannot be happy. It can only be expected by a Dead Man. He cannot desire, feel pain and response who is dead.

Rousseau said, "Man is born free and everywhere he is in chains." Man can not live in gala days because he is chained with chains of responsibilities, expectations, dreams, fears, taxes and desires. Everyman in this world is unhappy unless he dies. That is the only way to break the shackles of mortal and materialistic world.

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call no man happy till he is dead

all i can think about this topic is chacha ghalib ka shair
qaid e hayat o band e gham asal main dono aik hain
mout sy pehly admi gham sy nijat pay kiun!!!!
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قید حیات و بند غم ، اصل میں دونوں ایک ہیں
موت سے پہلے آدمی غم سے نجات پائے کیوں؟

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The prison of life and the bondage of grief are one and the same
Before the onset of death, how can man expect to be free of grief?
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