Originally Posted by pearlyS

Show me a hero and I will write you a tragedy


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Hero & (Better to use 'and' in formal English writing) villain are two characters that never leave us alone because either we are to act like or take side of the one. however,the romanticism that is attached with the word "hero" never fails to charm us & to make us feel greatly attractive toward this word & theme of heroism. Nonetheless,being a hero does come with a price-tag that is not in the pay-range of ordinary souls or we may say that when their is a hero,their is or are tragedies & trials by life_that goes a step beyond to test their mettle. The word 'hero' itself symbolizes the theme of being superior from others.so when we perceive someone as a hero,this is certainly because of something exceptional done by him.This something exceptional may be his courage,bravery,spirit of fight against all odds or any task that an ordinary man may feel too hefty to be undertaken. (No need to add 'to him' here) Thus somewhere we all connect this word hero with some sort of milestone or benchmark which is a must to cross a hurdle or gain a title.
Being a hero or person of unique abilities & achievements is not a piece of cake. Striving to conquer something hitherto invincible or staying impregnable despite volley of teething problems is a constant journey. Those who choose this path are extraordinary souls in ordinary bodies. though this earned them an eternal fame or laurels. however,a hard earned & maintained fame. once a person put on the shoes of a 'hero' after hackneyed struggle another battle ensues. battle to keep one's prestigious position or success.
when we go down the history lane & start glancing over life stories of all great people, we come across unique stories of sufferings,struggles & success. Nelson Mandella & Aung San Suu Kyi are two great names of modern political world.they are heros for their people in their own way. mandella earned this fame after a long fight for the rights of his nation.he suffered imprisonment for 27 years.aung san suu kyi remained under arrest for around 15 years in 20 years.again a persistent stance against trials thrown in by life. thus these long years of battling for the right thing & negating all luxuries offered by self-centredness fetched them the halo of glory.
thus the romanticism the word 'hero' exhibit is not without cost. jealousies, bottlenecks,traps,ploys,conspiracies & what not that come to hinder the path of a hero.it seems life too show it's stiff side before taking a hardworking man into her comforting lap.but after giving him taste of her cozy side,she again turns demanding.life is a teacher that never ceases to take exams & those who claim to be hero,for them life too shows her super skills of erecting barriers & animating nightmares.so,show me a hero & i will write you a tragedy.

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