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Best Of luck. |
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Write On IT! Time and Tide Waits For No Man. |
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However, here are some suggestions: Reduce the word count of expansion upto maximum of 300 words. Capitalize the first alphabet of the first word of a new sentence. Capitalize first alphabet of any particular noun. If the noun comprises of more than one word, capitalize first alphabet of all the words. (i.e. Nelson Mandela) Use 'and' in place of '&' in formal English writing.
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pearlyS (Thursday, July 26, 2012) |
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other than this what would you suggest me to further enhance my style of writing???
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Your style of writing is quite good. Writing simple sentences and ocassionly introducing some good vocab words is recommended. No need to complicate things. The simpler, the better. Keep on writing the way you are doing and IN SHA ALLAH you ll keep on improving.
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Show me a hero,I will write you a tragedy
''Do not seek ease in thy journey of life. Rather explore signs what is ordained for you. Face thy mishaps with courage , like one's slamming towards your corpse.'' It is oft -quoted that ,''life is not a bed of roses''.life is a compund of happiness and sufferings ;the more you face the sufferings you will be granted with internal rest.so ,it manifests itself brave persons have undergone a series of misfortunes but they changed the path of their luck with endless efforts. The one who aims high ,got their destined heaven .It seems life has choosen them in order to examine what they can do . Our beloved Holy prophet (p.b.u.h) experienced cruelities of infidels then any other man or prophet . So ,The tragic path of His life has given him a title of ''Rahmat -ul-alameen'' ,and Haider . Common man has become hero among large masses by converting the miseries of life .This phenomena demands heroic endevour . The up and downs are common in every body 'life but what lacks is wit and bravery .Tipo sultan was martyred and named as hero. Because ,he faced misfortunes and even faced death like one who is going to embrace friend . All men have equal rights but it is History that tells us a different thing . Many of them were assassinated,put behind the bars ,fired but were reluctant to their cause .Their will power ,to face the tragedy of life have made them hero. Storms captured me to weigh my courage, and you assumed it ,i am in difficulty, I have beaten thy ruthless waves, I have made my own destiny, I am the hero of my own life. It does not imply that hero is never beaten but the one who has been hard done by life .when the scale of tolerance hightened will power then fate knelt down towards the man like a maid
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zuhaib ahmed (Friday, July 27, 2012) |
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Some grammatical mistakes are coloured and written in bold. Quite well written. Good use of verses. But, two four line verses in expansion take quarter of words count. Overall, well-done. Keep it up, Sis G! |
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Some suggestions: Reduce the use of poetic verses. One set of verses written in the beginning of this expansion should be enough. Take care of sentence structure, tenses, punctuation marks.
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@ zuhaib and usman ,
thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,... Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that. @last para i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''
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