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Originally Posted by ssara View Post
Date: Juldy 27,2012
The apex of abysmal terrorism is still upholding overwhelmingly
Since a decade owing to the apex of abysmal terrorism, our country has been suffered a lot terribly. Day by day the terrorism is going to its obscure apex and has killed 35,00 people. Among them 5000 were of law enforcement personnel. On the other hand, Pakistans economy has been affected about an estimated $67 owing the damage of the material. Besides, according the estimated, 2% growth rate of Pakistan, what for country of fiscal population of 180 million turns out to be roughly around 3.2 million every year. Consequently, it is a big gouge to the economy of our country and it has become the biggest hurdle for diverse fields to progress exclusively. However, In 2004 our army indicated the Al-Qaida members in the mountain area of Waziristan on the Afghanistan border, owing to the persuade of Al-Qaida, a little mountain erupted in form of a conflict between Islamic militants and local tribesmen, a war became started from Waziristan. Later on a short truce, known as the Waziristan accord, was brokered in September 2006, which indicated Pakistans reluctance to fight Islamic Militant. Owing to war on terror, Pakistan has nearly lost her pelf and prestige because in the world whenever any sort of terrorists and extremists activities take place, without investigating, the whole world use to look over to the country of Pakistan and is considered the link with Pakistan. Unfortunately, Pakistan has nearly lost her name and fame owing to the said conundrum. However, it is the time for our current government to speculate over this obscure issue and device an effective strategy to tackle this problem and prevent it as soon as possible.
Dear Sara!

Nearly 35000 people have been killed by terrorism uptill now. Not 3500.

Your imagination is good but please try to focus on sentence structure as well.

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