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Originally Posted by pearlyS
Indeed a laudable effort...your plan to do it on regular basis will help you a lot,inshAllah.some points which i want to mention
1.Try to use simple words & keep heavy vocabulary for decoration purpose i.e occasionally. Too florid sentence gives a a negative impact.
2. Learn the appropriate use of heavy vocab..
Since a decade, owing to abysmal terrorism, our country has been suffered a lot terribly. or Since a decade,owing to increasing terrorism related incidents,our country has suffered a lot. (how about these 2 sentences??compare & feel the difference)
Besides, according the estimated, 2% growth rate of Pakistan, what for country of fiscal population of 180 million turns out to be roughly around 3.2 million every year
Think again,the sense it is conveying??
3. Accurate use of tenses means an impression that is bound to benefit you.
Keep writing & improving 
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An appreciable effort and I strongly agreed with PEARLYS bro, in addition to his said instructions before concluding the article also suggest some ways for resolving the problem don't put it on the readers.
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Originally Posted by ssara
Date: Juldy 27,2012
The apex of abysmal terrorism is still upholding overwhelmingly
Since a decade owing to the apex of abysmal terrorism, our country has been suffered a lot terribly. Day by day the terrorism is going to its obscure apex and has killed 35,00 people.
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and correct the above mentioned figures too please. How can you say 5000 Officials have been killed out of 3500....
It must be 35000 if I'm not mistaken.