Originally Posted by nadiamughal

IDPs Internally displaced persons
Internally displaced persons are the groups or individuals forced or obliged to flee their homes particularly as a result to(either use in a bid to avoid armed conflict or in result of armed conflict avoid armed conflict, generalized violence, natural disasters,use and instead of comma violation of humen rights.sentence should be ended here to avoid ambiguity who remain in their own countries.Over the years Pakistan has experienced large scale humenhuman displacement due to several facters behind. In 2009 millitary operations against militants in FATA caused massive humen displacement and again in 2010 large scale displacent occurred due to worst flooding in Khyber pakhtun khawa and sindh. The large scale displacement crisis in 2009 and 2010 were the only latest humen exodus in Pakistan they are precede by dislocation of population following clashes between rival militant and sectarian groups in tribal areas,military operation against the insurgents in FATA, insurgents in Balochistan,generalized violence ond discrimination,violation of humen rights,natural and humen caused disasters, devastating earthquakes as in Khayber pakhtun khawa,havoc caused by floods and displacement due to developmental projects such as construction of water reservoir.......dear you stuffed too many things in single sentence.Result is you yourself could not get that how to tackle that.Shorten your sentences All indicaters suggest that internal displacement will remain a key issue in pakisatn at least in near future.

Since internally displaced persons remain within the territorial jurisdiction of their own countries,thus, the primary duty and responsibility to provide protection and humanitarian assistance to them ,without discrimination and violation, violation of what? ison the shoulders of state. Internally displaced remained a dismay in our territory since 1979 when exodously displaced persons came to Pakistan due to soviet intervention and exploitation in Afghanistan and overburdened the tribal areas caused resource pressure in already scarce areas.they were not internally displaced,they were refugees.For a moment if they were IDP's,even then this sentence is over burdened too. Despite hosting one of the world’s largest displaced populations in recent times the refugees are so exhorbiant in number that Pakistan has failed to accommodate them and provide social securities and protection as well that caused the huge militancy in tribal belt and the net result is insurgency in remote areas for their rights and other ill defined motives. Dear check this sentence,it's lacking in structure as well as your reasoning is faulty too.

Several other facters aggravated the dismal situation of displacement and worsend the humanitarian crisis and country is still facing humanitarian and economic crisis due to IDPs. Many of the crisis arised due to overwhelming focus on emergency situation and mitigation instead of pre protection and imidiate needs/protection of displaced rather than being rights-centric. The majority of the internally displaced persons could not get the securities provided by state due to favourtism and concession to the affected populations. The concerns for displacement are so many that range from disaster management and policy implementation the host community affordability. All individuals who suffer enforced displacement are exposed to a range of vulnerabilities and a sense of disempowerment besides heavy deaths property loss as in natural disasters. Women and children often suffer the most particularly in conflict-induced displacement settings. Higher dependence on host community caused a pressure on resources which annoyed the masses in getting the basic commodities as well as psychological damage.

On the ground realities the massive displacement demands an urgent and viable solution in which the Pakistan has beend badely failed. Sawat operation has been termed as largest humanitarian crisis internationally. Provision of basic necessities (food,shelter,clothing,sanitation), rehabilitation and livelihood restoration, psychological support of diprived and needy, accountable distribution of protection, medical facilities as in natural, provision of humen rights, non discriminatory relief and coordination of aid and assistance are short term solutions in general and better disaster management and policy implementation and effective and oversight accountable institutions of disaster control,proactive measures are some long term solutions in particular.

The magnitude and incidence of involuntary displacement in Pakistan in recent times has far exceeded and trend is likely to continue. However the official response has been largely reactive but flawed in formulating a focus on preventing internal disasters. The cumulative effect of natural and human disasters in Pakistan is that humanitarian needs are greater than ever. The casual facters are a complex bunch that cannot b addressed without a concise and practicable policy. Displacement give rise to particular vulnerabilities for women and children specially and need to b focused in comprehensive manner.Ensuring enforcement of humen rights instruments specific to women and children can support for their protection, empowerment and rights in trubbled situation of displacement. Immidiate humanitarian assistance is crucial in internally displaced situations but focus need to move beyond emergency response.

Please evaluate this point out the mistakes where to focus much etc etc. :/