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Improvement or success do not come in a jiffy.Practice leads you to heights that demands prior hard & smart work.So be patient during this phase & do write atleast a paragraph on whatever topic you like (better is to write on topics of current affairs or Pak-affairs).Start from today with ambition to conquer....! Write & post your work here like sara so that all members will help or guide you. Best of Luck Regards |
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IDPs Internally displaced persons
Internally displaced persons are the groups or individuals forced or obliged to flee their homes particularly as a result to avoid armed conflict, generalized violence, natural disasters, violation of humen rights who remain in their own countries.Over the years Pakistan has experienced large scale humen displacement due to several facters behind. In 2009 millitary operations against militants in FATA caused massive humen displacement and again in 2010 large scale displacent occurred due to worst flooding in Khyber pakhtun khawa and sindh. The large scale displacement crisis in 2009 and 2010 were the only latest humen exodus in Pakistan they are precede by dislocation of population following clashes between rival militant and sectarian groups in tribal areas,military operation against the insurgents in FATA, insurgents in Balochistan,generalized violence ond discrimination,violation of humen rights,natural and humen caused disasters, devastating earthquakes as in Khayber pakhtun khawa,havoc caused by floods and displacement due to developmental projects such as construction of water reservoir. All indicaters suggest that internal displacement will remain a key issue in pakisatn at least in near future. Since internally displaced persons remain within the territorial jurisdiction of their own countries the primary duty and responsibility to provide protection and humanitarian assistance to them without discrimination and violation on the shoulders of state. Internally displaced remained a dismay in our territory since 1979 when exodously displaced persons came to Pakistan due to soviet intervention and exploitation in Afghanistan and overburdened the tribal areas caused resource pressure in already scarce areas. Despite hosting one of the world’s largest displaced populations in recent times the refugees are so exhorbiant in number that Pakistan has failed to accommodate them and provide social securities and protection as well that caused the huge militancy in tribal belt and the net result is insurgency in remote areas for their rights and other ill defined motives. Several other facters aggravated the dismal situation of displacement and worsend the humanitarian crisis and country is still facing humanitarian and economic crisis due to IDPs. Many of the crisis arised due to overwhelming focus on emergency situation and mitigation instead of pre protection and imidiate needs/protection of displaced rather than being rights-centric. The majority of the internally displaced persons could not get the securities provided by state due to favourtism and concession to the affected populations. The concerns for displacement are so many that range from disaster management and policy implementation the host community affordability. All individuals who suffer enforced displacement are exposed to a range of vulnerabilities and a sense of disempowerment besides heavy deaths property loss as in natural disasters. Women and children often suffer the most particularly in conflict-induced displacement settings. Higher dependence on host community caused a pressure on resources which annoyed the masses in getting the basic commodities as well as psychological damage. On the ground realities the massive displacement demands an urgent and viable solution in which the Pakistan has beend badely failed. Sawat operation has been termed as largest humanitarian crisis internationally. Provision of basic necessities (food,shelter,clothing,sanitation), rehabilitation and livelihood restoration, psychological support of diprived and needy, accountable distribution of protection, medical facilities as in natural, provision of humen rights, non discriminatory relief and coordination of aid and assistance are short term solutions in general and better disaster management and policy implementation and effective and oversight accountable institutions of disaster control,proactive measures are some long term solutions in particular. The magnitude and incidence of involuntary displacement in Pakistan in recent times has far exceeded and trend is likely to continue. However the official response has been largely reactive but flawed in formulating a focus on preventing internal disasters. The cumulative effect of natural and human disasters in Pakistan is that humanitarian needs are greater than ever. The casual facters are a complex bunch that cannot b addressed without a concise and practicable policy. Displacement give rise to particular vulnerabilities for women and children specially and need to b focused in comprehensive manner.Ensuring enforcement of humen rights instruments specific to women and children can support for their protection, empowerment and rights in trubbled situation of displacement. Immidiate humanitarian assistance is crucial in internally displaced situations but focus need to move beyond emergency response. Please evaluate this point out the mistakes where to focus much etc etc. :/
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p.s mistakes have been marked,whole essay has not been marked as i got what was lacking.Also try to be coherent while expressing your thoughts on paper. Regards
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The grammatical mistakes were sorted out and suggestions were told already. I asked you, "Is it an Essay or an Article?" you replied, "It is an Essay." And, It is written in the very post that it is Essay. But, it is not! It is not a CSS Essay by any means. There is a big diffference between an Essay and an article. You better read the rules and regulations of Essay writing. Most of the time, CSS Essay is checked by your outlines. Which you have not given. Ok! Well. The most important thing of an Essay is INTRODUCTION. Your very introduction is not an introduction of Essay but a start of story writing. Your introduction: What’s my identity? Am I male or female? Some call me hey 50/50 with a huge laughter on their face!!! Some call me the laughing stock of nature. I am unwanted baby of my parents, hated fellow of my brother and sisters. I am just a thing of amusement and unfit in this so-called civilized Muslim society. What’s my fault if I am created like this by my Creator? It was never my choice to be like that! This is not just an introduction of an essay but the painful and unheard melody of the most rare creation of God commonly known as third gender. One can't use first personal singular (I) in Essay which you have used. So, it is not an INTRODUCTION. MOST OF THE TIME CSS EXAMINER GIVES YOU MARKS HAVING CHECKED YOUR INTRODUCTION. THINK ABOUT IT! Examiner wants good introduction. Give time to your introduction. Introduction must be gist of your whole essay with a thesis and statement. Regards, |
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Regards Sara... My dear sweet pearlyS............!!!!!!! What can I say about you my dearest friend!!! I like you very much You are the beeeest member of this forum.... I like your such a nice help and comments which encourage me a lot. You not only point out my mistakes but always give me crystal clear idea about my stuff as well.....I am very thankful to you, And please keep in touch with me and keep guiding me...... I have noted your suggestions which you have given me. And inshALLAH will not see my these mistakes, I will try my best not repeat these sort of mistakes in grammar and stuff again. I have selected an interesting topic for the next essay. now, I am working in it.... I hope it will be helpful for our ce-13's attempt.......(keep guiding me and keep in touch with.........and please remember me in your prayers... Thanks....... Regards Quote:
My dear Zuhaib, I have noted down your points. And now am working for the next essay, and inshALLAH I will post it with full outlines like our exam in CSS. Thanks...... Keep guiding me....... |
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Nevertheless and However
We can use either of the adverbs however or nevertheless to indicate that the second point we wish to make contrasts with the first point. The difference is one of formality: nevertheless is bit more formal and emphatic than however. Note that however and nevertheless are normally placed in initial position in a sentence when contrasting two ideas. They can, however, also come in mid position or end position: Apart from and Besides Apart from and besides are often used to mean as well as, or in addition to Although, despite and in spite Although, despite and in spite of introduce an idea of contrast. With these words, you must have two halves of a sentence. "Although it was cold, she went out in shorts." "In spite of the cold, she went out in shorts , ." While, Whereas and Unlike While, whereas and unlike are used to show how two things are different from each other. "While my sister has blue eyes, mine are brown." saraa, best of luck........
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There is general tendency to read fictions (novels and short stories) in order to find thrills and excitement and thus to relieve the boredom of life. It is not realized by one that truth or actual accidents of life proved more excitement and thrills than even fiction.
We read stories of crime and detection because we feel the need of sensation. But crimes actually committed and manner of their investigation are even more sensational than fictional crimes and their detection. In ingenuity, in planning and in brutality actual crimes surpass the fictional crimes. Matricide, patricide, fratricide, infanticide, homicide, and suicide al are reported by news papers and the accounts of these are hair-rising. Bank hold-ups, highway robberies, smugglings, abductions, kidnappings, criminal assaults on woman, and rape these and similar other outrages as reported by news paper are more sensational and fascinating that the fictional fare served by story writers. The amorous and sexual adventures of Christine Keeler were found to be stranger and more interesting then those of Madam Bovary. The dramatic rescue of hostages by Israeli commandos at Entebbe airport was more astonishing and thrilling than any fictional episode of the same kind. The assassination of former prime minister of Pakistan Benazir Bhutto shaheed was more breathtaking, sensational, and baffling than anything in fiction. Indeed, real life offers stranger things than the imagination of a story writer can invent please point out mistakes...........
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