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Originally Posted by Da Skeptic
میرے عزیز ! گرچہ کوشش اچھی ہے مگر پہلا مصرع اور دوسرا مصرع وزن میں برابر نہیں ہیں۔ نظر ِ ثانی کی ضرورت ہے۔
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Thank you very much for your criticism. I will certainly take it positively. However, I just got reminded of a saying of Lord Byron about Keats "He didn't die of Tuberculosis but of a broken heart." Just a saying
Thanks again
@ Farrah Zafar
Thanks for appreciation.
Regards