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Originally Posted by Afshan Choudary
Paragraph for precise writing from 2002 ppr
Title: importance of Language
Anthropologist referred human as tool maker because he could express himself. Without language human beings were mere animals. It was language through which they got information and transform it into others. Religious knowledge, morality code and formulation of laws, all were possible due to language. It was language which made us superior creature. It is bedrock of civilized society. (total 59 word)
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Anthropologists referred human beings as tool makers not because they could express themselves rather they were doers, the were able to carve different tools out of stone and metals. So, in my opinion , the first sentence needs some adjustments. Few grammatical errors need little attention as well.