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Originally Posted by Afshan Choudary
Paragraph for precise writing from 2003 ppr
Title: Education creates personality not university
University is producing good members of society. However, it is not a birthplace of national leaders nor creates intellectuals of society. It does not produce professionals of specific fields; rather it nourishes the mind and teaches principles of life. But, education is a tool which provides ability to discrete and to distinguish between right and wrong. Also, it provides scope to impart particular subject to occupy honorable post. (word count:68)
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However, it is not a birthplace of national leaders nor creates intellectuals of society--- it is neither a birthplace of national leaders nor creates intellectuals.
we generally use 'rather' to communicate something negative. For Example, the bed was not comfortable rather it was very hard.
Also, it provides scope to impart particular subject to occupy honorable post. --this sentence made no sense to me
