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Originally Posted by mariashamshad
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"Real purpose of university training"
It is the university training who(that) polishes the good members of the society extensively(,) and groom them in such a way which(that) results in a healthy society. Its aim is not to deliver the great personalities,scholars,leaders(,) and conquers(conqueror) (,)but the diamonds of the first water. It works like an edifier with the aim of raising intellectual level of its members. university provides education and education opens the new doors by purifying the overall personality. And it ends on delivering the man of highest excellence and fit for the world.
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" Which is usually used in informal language and not in academic formal writings. Try to focus on punctuations, articles, and grammar. Overall good going.
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