Originally Posted by agilicious

Thank you for your comments and appreciation!

well i believe it was the most suitable given the literature, the word "society". Lets just agree to disagree

Originally Posted by agilicious

Nicely put, like always

Few corrections/suggestions:

"Plato viewed art as a fuel for provoking desires and Tolstoi considered art as contagious.His theory undermined the very nature of it which is passion,different from moral wisdom."

here "HIS THEORY" is creating confusion because in the last sentence you've quoted 2 theories/philoshophers.

"The emotions aroused by art are not of past but are of present moment.Shakespear’s work depicted the same truth,at his plays one had never gone deep in to emotions but instead stayed at the moment without moral disturbance."

You can see how these sentences do not connect but somehow are contradictory!

This is how it looks to me, apart from these you have good expression.

P.S. I am not sure whether its alright to quote the writers etc, but i thought that it wasn't alright (thats why i dint quote anything specific) because we're just giving an outline of what the article/writer is saying. I might be wrong. Seniors please help!!!!!