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Originally Posted by Bilal Hassan View Post
Sadia this is a succinct, compact and comprehensive extraction of the actual passage...Good job done...BUT room for improvement is always there so now i would like to make some comments based on my critical analysis, and this is exactly you wanted from me..so here we go..
the Title is the linchpin to secure good marks in precis...if precis is the summary of the passage then title is the summary of your precis.....there is definitely nothing wrong with your title but you have narrowed the scope of passage, this passage is not only about identifying the objectives but also implicating according to them, and both these things i-e identifying and implicating are the part of Management, and for your passage a Management term MBO (Management by objectives) qualifies to be the best and very precise title...
A Tip
Do not think about title from the very start, please do not make a title from what you gather out of actual passage, i suggest all of you to make precis first, once you have done this, now give a title to your precis because this is the real currux and one more benefit you get by doing this, there would be no contradiction between precis and title because title is derived from precis...and it is easier to derive title from precis because you have to deal with only 1/3rd of actual passage, so you get the whole idea easily.....
Best of Luck in all your endeavors...
I have understood what you have said and i got one more tip .Thanx dear .. what about other precis ..please check them too ...waiting


http://www.cssforum.com.pk/522975-post21.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/523352-post33.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...-practise.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/522523-post20.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/522523-post20.html


http://www.cssforum.com.pk/514994-post2.html

The title in this is wrongly typed ..it is monetary cessation of unhappiness
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