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Old Friday, December 21, 2012
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Originally Posted by Bilal Hassan View Post
I respectfully beg to differ with your teacher, i hope he is fully acquainted with the requirements of CSS English, if he is just an English teacher and you are counting on him then you better be careful as in this PMS exam many experienced teachers have miserably failed in both Essay and composition paper and they also have M.Phil degree and have been teaching English for half decade, even there are many on this very forum, i won't name them though...the purpose of telling you the whole story is that if you rely on him because he teaches English then this is not a good bet...

we have to hit the bull's eye, you gotta write the expansion in 250-300 words. how can you manage to properly describe the given topic and give different perspectives as well staying within the words limit?




except some minor grammatical mistakes this is very amazingly done...keep practicing, you are getting this...
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Originally Posted by IMTIAZ AHMAD KHAN View Post
Well attempt this time!

You have improved in a very short span of time.But it would be better for you to give as many examples as you can from real life e.g Our Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H),Zaheer-ud-Din Babar,Quaid-e-Azam M.A Jinnah,the Western developed nations,etc.What you need is to carry it on 'daily basis' and keep in contact with CSS forum as we are all here to help one another.

best of luck for your next attempts!!

Thanks Imtiaz..yes I should have to mention some great names from history too.. Hopefully further writings will be containing such examples..InshaAllah



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