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Originally Posted by Afshan Choudary View Post
2007

1) "This world", he declared "is full of sorrow. Would that I were dead!"
He declared that this world is full of sorrow and wished that he had been dead.
4) The man said that he was quite sure he should succeed.
The man said,''I am quite sure I should succeed.''
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8) "what losses", cried he, “have I suffered? What anguish have I endured!”
He exclaimed with grief that he had suffered great losses and he had endured great anguish.
1=> try to start with the wish clause and put the general fact/observation at its back.

4=> should be changed to shall

8=> I feel it would work well without 2nd he had. Does the word great fit in it?
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