That is good, I had also mentioned these same things in my introduction that without mature politics and political culture, economy can not be boost, and gave example some examples. But in this essay we had to discuss about the current facts and figures of economy if we have opted this topic in context to Pakistan's circumstances. That is why I discussed about FDI, Brain Drain, Hydra monster what is called terrorism and its impact on economy, and immature political culture is the main things which is generating these circumstances and so on. My introduction was outstanding and I gave optimistic conclusion that indeed, not economy but politics is a key to success. In simple words, my main focus was politics and in each paragraph I discussed argumentatively that indeed, not economy but politics is a key to success, and lastly I proved it with a quotation.

@shakeel ghouri

what was the length of your essay, how many pages mine were only 14 pages..