Originally Posted by shakeel ghori

I have attempted this essay:

Not economy but politics is a key to success.

Outline

1-Introduction
a. Politics is a source of overall progress of a nation.
b. Pakistan is the product of political struggle.

2-Why politics is vital for human society.
a. Maintains law and order.
b. Ensures economic development.
c. Regulates whole administrative affairs of a country.
d. Protects fundamental rights of citizens.
e. Developed countries have stable political order.
..I remember that I had written two other points as well, but I could not recall them right now

3-Political system of Pakistan
a. Historical background.
b. Currently, political system of Pakistan is unstable.
c. Evidence to prove this assertion

4-Causes of political instability.
a. Illiteracy.
b. Corruption
c. Feudalism
d. Ideological differences (ethnic, religious, territorial and political)
e. Lack of co-ordination among various institutions.
f. Frequent military interventions in civilian affairs.
...I had mentioned two other points as well, but now could not recall exactly.

5-Solutions/suggestions.
a. Promoting education
b. Political reconciliation
c. Efforts be made for national integration
d. Participation of commoners in decision making
e. Ensuring accountability.
f. Coordination among institutions is vital for political stability
...I am not certain whether I had written suggestions in the same order, but I believe that the points were almost less or more same as written above.

6-Conclusion....

Valuable comments of respected memebers will be acknowledged..

Originally Posted by shakeel ghori

I have attempted this essay:

Not economy but politics is a key to success.

Outline

1-Introduction
a. Politics is a source of overall progress of a nation.
b. Pakistan is the product of political struggle.

2-Why politics is vital for human society.
a. Maintains law and order.
b. Ensures economic development.
c. Regulates whole administrative affairs of a country.
d. Protects fundamental rights of citizens.
e. Developed countries have stable political order.
..I remember that I had written two other points as well, but I could not recall them right now

3-Political system of Pakistan
a. Historical background.
b. Currently, political system of Pakistan is unstable.
c. Evidence to prove this assertion

4-Causes of political instability.
a. Illiteracy.
b. Corruption
c. Feudalism
d. Ideological differences (ethnic, religious, territorial and political)
e. Lack of co-ordination among various institutions.
f. Frequent military interventions in civilian affairs.
...I had mentioned two other points as well, but now could not recall exactly.

5-Solutions/suggestions.
a. Promoting education
b. Political reconciliation
c. Efforts be made for national integration
d. Participation of commoners in decision making
e. Ensuring accountability.
f. Coordination among institutions is vital for political stability
...I am not certain whether I had written suggestions in the same order, but I believe that the points were almost less or more same as written above.

6-Conclusion....

Valuable comments of respected memebers will be acknowledged..

Originally Posted by Prince of Duhmp

AoA, That is a very good attempt dear. One thing that I find missing is the comparison between Economy and Politics wherein the reasons of dominance of politics over economy should have been communicated. In your outline the word Economy has not used even for a single time whereas it is compared in the given title. However the importance of Politics is beautifully dealt.

Regards

Originally Posted by skyingg

I second, .... I discussed about our dying economy, FDI, Brain drain and our current GDP and so on.... These were the points to be discussed, am I right?

Originally Posted by skyingg

Overall you have attempted well, though you have missed an important point. Not Economy but Politics is a Key to Success............ Where is economy, why Economy is not a key to success????????????????????????????

Dear you have done good, I pray for your success, but you have missed main thing, I have also attempted same topic. It went outstanding. We can discuss it further......

Originally Posted by Prince of Duhmp

AoA, That is a very good attempt dear. One thing that I find missing is the comparison between Economy and Politics wherein the reasons of dominance of politics over economy should have been communicated. In your outline the word Economy has not used even for a single time whereas it is compared in the given title. However the importance of Politics is beautifully dealt.

Regards

Originally Posted by skyingg

@shakeel ghouri

what was the length of your essay, how many pages mine were only 14 pages..

Originally Posted by skyingg

That is good, I had also mentioned these same things in my introduction that without mature politics and political culture, economy can not be boost, and gave example some examples. But in this essay we had to discuss about the current facts and figures of economy if we have opted this topic in context to Pakistan's circumstances. That is why I discussed about FDI, Brain Drain, Hydra monster what is called terrorism and its impact on economy, and immature political culture is the main things which is generating these circumstances and so on. My introduction was outstanding and I gave optimistic conclusion that indeed, not economy but politics is a key to success. In simple words, my main focus was politics and in each paragraph I discussed argumentatively that indeed, not economy but politics is a key to success, and lastly I proved it with a quotation.

Originally Posted by skyingg

I have also attempted same topic. But mine was little different......

1-Intro,(I discussed present happening about politics and economy of Pakistan and agreed that indeed, not economy but politics is a key to success....

2-Present Scenario ( in it I discussed about present scenario of politics and economy of Pakistan)

3-Causes (In it, I discussed about causes that why our politics is immature and also discussed the unbalanced institutions of Pakistan, after that I also discussed that not economy but politics is a key to success) I gave a lot of facts and figures including updated statistics regarding economy, FDI, Brain Drain, Decline in Economy due to law and order situation and our political system's scenario)

4-Suggestions (In this, I discussed that first of all we have to make our politics mature and outstanding then we can boost our economy, lastly, I proved it

5-Conclusion (I gave optimistic conclusion with an outstanding quotation


I use bold pen, so I wrote 14 pages, about 1500 words, and my outlines were one and half page with black marker.....

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