@ sandhurst.

well..healthy practice it is to invite the "critical analysis" and wht should follow it must be with some sort of soberness and logic .For, though every person has right in its own sphere to comment wht ever comes in to his mind but to throw up stray comments get no where for the appreciation as they are void of calculated stuff.
firstly ,your comment that "the content is right, expression is good, your ideas may or may not find approval of the examiner".This shows the influence of pessimism on ones head .For, the Fpsc provides you opportunity to pass the exam not to fail in it.And examiner wht i suppose does not keep his biased attitude while checking paper ,for hunderds pass the essay paper ... and can one think that examiners (one person ) has equally the same view as the two hundereds have about the topic?
Secondly, the essay is self-expression of an individual towards topic.it is never meant to reflect wht goes in the mind of examiner. Further,ingredients of essay or wht is required to pass an essay is tht you have to put ur articulation of thoughts cogently ,well connected ,argumentatively substantive, logically acceptable and more importantly focused to the theme or thesis statement of the essay . If intrepretation of an essay is right and one succeeds to keep the strings(paragraphs of an essay )attached/held straight to the central point , one stands at good chance to pass it.


Thirdly, in your opinion ... Mushraf is pro-west and is much hated figure in Pakistan... .....but may be not of an examiner.....but this may also be understood that there are political contrivances and political interests that determine what future course of policy be determined.It depends not at the whim of some one to lead the country with certain policy .


and lastly, dear sandhurst ... it is never appreciative to address some one with "chamcha of mushraf" and in the end saying one : better luck next timeas you did). For, no one is authority but examiner, who knows wht happens at the end of day... hope u understand.

Good luck for all candidates of 2007.My prayers are with you.