The choice of essay was good but the outline as mentioned here does not convey much to the reader or the examiner. The points have been mentioned so briefly that the ideas or the views you have taken on particular issues are not coming out in your outline. I agree with Irfee's assessment that you have gone rather wide. You have to be careful and continue to link globalisation with eletronic media throughout your essay. Unfortunately paragraph c) did not have much relevance with the topic and this may yet prove your undoing.