Originally Posted by LightWave

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Where there is a will, there is a way

Sometimes we try to achieve certain things in life; we may face difficult obstacles in our way, we may fail many times and it would even seem impossible to achieve our goals but if we keep trying with a persistent will and do not lose hope, we would eventually succeed. Our human history is filled with such examples.

The thought of flying was considered absurd and near to impossible but it did not stop the Wright Brothers to keep trying, even though they faced many failures, eventually they invented airplanes. It is because of their persistent will that we enjoy flight today.

During the British Raj in Subcontinent; the thought of Pakistan seemed impossible to achieve but it did not stop our founding fathers to keep trying and eventually succeed. Today we owe our identity to their persistent will
It is our stubbornness and unwillingness to accept defeat that makes us humans so unique and sets us apart from animals. It allows us to achieve amazing feats, such as going into space, walking on the moon, drill through mountains, climb Mount Everest, travel into the deep sea, and make progress which has led us out of caves.

So we conclude we should not let obstacles and failures disheartened us and keep us from trying. With a persistent will we would eventually succeed, like many before us.