Firstly it`s not a paragraph. It intend to be Pointwise figures. Try to avoid amphorous structures.
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bahraam khan abro has the landlorded man, of our family and he was an also chief operating man of abro family.
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Bahraam khan abro was a landlord (Landlord is itself a noun, It doesn`t need any supportive adjective. While has reveal Present perfect which advocate past action & present evident. Thus Past Simple is exact form for it).
He was also head of the family (An article is never followed by additional words).
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bahraam khan abro has two soned 1st(*shah muhammad abro) and 2nd (*ameer bux abro) and also has one daughtered
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He had two sons, Shah mohammad abro and Ameer bux abro, and only daughter. (Noun never repeats simualtaneously rather changes with Pronoun. Son is a noun, So verb forms never apply over the noun).
I gotta go, I`ll answer the rest portion as soon as possible. Moreover, Try to discriminate Nouns, Verbs and Adjectives.
Chao,