Man is (the) slave of his own circumstances. No man is born as a criminal. Many varying dwindling situations leads (lead) to financial crisis (which) compel(compels) a man to become a criminal. Particularly, it is poverty which gives birth to a crime. Poverty propels a man to fulfill his requirements by unfair means. Poverty flourishes (or nourishes) a criminal mind in an innocent person. A (A) man who can earn enough to bring up his family can never engage with any criminal act.(Really? what about thousands of millionaire criminals??) On the other hand, a starving person who has been grinded by privation ultimately turns out to a dacoit(turns out to be a dacoit/turns into a dacoit.).
Privation makes a man mean and selfish. Man in distress never restrains himself from killing someone for money.(Never? It is very hard for a distressed man to restrain himself from killing someone for money.) (It is difficult for a man in distress to restrain himself from killing someone for money) Women sell their bodies to save their children from the jaws of death. History is galore with so many examples that men and women committed crimes just because of pennilessness. A starving poor person does not care about (the) religion and any other moral value. Swami vivekanada was of the opinion that religion was not meant for the hungry bodies. A prosper person who has enough to eat and spent(spend), cared (cares) well about the religion. Rules and values of religion fell flat upon hungry peoples (people). They can go beyond (the) limits of morality to get rid of(get rid?? no one can get rid of hunger till death, we can only satisfy our hunger/can satisfy) their hunger. So, poverty made (makes) a person prey to social evils.
People are still living below (the) poverty line all over the world. Under-developed and developing countries have high crime rates[/B] as compared (compare) to developed countries. In case of Pakistan 64 million people living below poverty line, makes (make) 22.31% of (the) total population.(The) Poverty rate of Pakistan is 37.5% which is gradually increases (increasing) due to poor management of the country. Social crimes is (are) common in Pakistan. Economical reforms and practical Implementation are required to cope up with poverty. Poverty is one of the basic social problem which gives rise too (to) many crimes in society. (Irrelevant Paragraph. It has nothing to do with this expansion.)
Poverty is (the) root cause of frustration and acute distress for (a) man. Poverty gives disappointment and makes a person hopeless in life. It also leads to suicidal attempts. (only attempts? It also leads to suicides.) Poverty can be eliminated (or reduced) by appropriate measures. Crime rate is directly related to (the) poverty rate in societies. If a government wants to eliminate crimes out of its bounds they must ensures (it have to ensure) (it has to ensure) prosperity to (for) its citizens. Prosperity brings peace and harmony among people and eventually declines crime rate. Ultimate increases in crimes observe with failure in provision of applicable measures to exterminate poverty.(This sentence is not making sense..)
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I have further pointed out the mistakes, using blue colour, brother my first suggestion would be, you should have read after what you have written, this will surely make a sense of getting your own mistakes, because i have seen, your mistakes were not so difficult to be pointed out, you have to use Articles where necessary, a lot of grammatical mistakes, you have to be good in grammer first.... and remember, whenever you write something just read it then, to point out your mistakes....

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