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Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed
- I have high-lighted mistakes. Correct them.
- Use punctuation correctly.
- You had better tell age of Keats. Inserting his poetry doesn't suit. I think, his age was 25-26.
- You could give example of Mohammad Bin Qasim and Alaxender.
- Overall Good Efforts. Keep the good work on.  |
yes you have rightly mentioned. I forgot to use punctuations plus to write every first capital alphabet of new line. Yes he died at the age of 25. I inserted the reference of his poetry because it shows he had already realized that his life was short. He continued to give his best which is to be remembered by every generation. Yes I agreed there could be many examples of those who had achieved goodwill in short period of their lives.