We Live in Deeds Not years
Everyone is born to die. Its not the length of life that matters but all the solid achievements made by a man in short span of life matters a lot. there are certain Individuals who had short span of like but their works, achievement left a commendable impression on upcoming generation. people see their ideal in them.John keats the famous English poet died quite young. he had written many impressive, inspiring poem for poetry lovers. one of his poem "I have fears that i may cease to be" reminds us that he was expecting his life soon come to an end. he gave best odes to the english poetry.he still exists in our memories."It is part of a good man to do great and noble deeds, though he risk everything" (plutrach) one should live his life for others. this is all about the quality of life not quantity rules ever. Rashid Minhas was a young air force pilot and patriot. he embraced shahadat at the age of 20 only. he was gifted with Nishan e Hader. if he had a long life he might could have could not come up with such prestige which he got after shahadat. Long life of a man without any worthwhile deeds is useless. it resembles animal s life. one is known by his deeds, urge and nature.Hence,instead of longing for a long life, marked by dullness, insipidity one should have determined life. one should aim at doing something concrete and worthy in life that one may have short life.

Nice work! please ensure that your singular plural relation(s) in the sentence conform (I cant recall what it is called). For example: He had written many impressive and inspiring poems and not a poem!

Secondly use only English words or those words that are now part of English i.e. "vis-à-vis". Shahadat is not an English word (Its Arabic). The correct word over here would be martyrdom!

Moreover carry on the good work. You happen to be one of the very exciting writers on this forum

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I Know I am Bad But When Bad is the Best, Bad is the Only Choice

Respected Brother, I will try to build my vocabulary with updated words. Yes I'm excited to produce flawless piece of writing as
my grammar is weak.. Secondly, Essay and Composition make me scary . Anyways, thanks a lot you are doing a great job for us. May you be blessed with success Ameen.

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- I have high-lighted mistakes. Correct them.
- Use punctuation correctly.
- You had better tell age of Keats. Inserting his poetry doesn't suit. I think, his age was 25-26.
- You could give example of Mohammad Bin Qasim and Alaxender.
- Overall Good Efforts. Keep the good work on.

yes you have rightly mentioned. I forgot to use punctuations plus to write every first capital alphabet of new line. Yes he died at the age of 25. I inserted the reference of his poetry because it shows he had already realized that his life was short. He continued to give his best which is to be remembered by every generation. Yes I agreed there could be many examples of those who had achieved goodwill in short period of their lives.

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I really could not get the real meaning of this proverb. However, I tried my best to expand this idea. Seniors are requested to check this expansion and let me know the obvious flaws.

IN STRATEGY IT IS IMPORTANT OT SEE DISTANT THINGS CLOSE AND TAKE A DISTANT VIEW OF CLOSE THINGS (CSS 2002)

Today’s world is called global village, because no nations can survive in isolation. Every country is connected with each other though some solid threads. These threads can be economic, political, or religious. These bonds make every country keep an eye over other. They get information through these means and make their strategies. In strategy it is important to see very necessary activities of other countries that are far away from us. On the contrary, we also need to have distant view of neighbouring countries. America, say for example, is very far from the south Asia, but we can see its involvement in this continent as well as others. America’s interference in Middle East, Asia, and Africa is a case in point. She is never unaware of the activities of those countries she takes interest in. This involvement is not only to keep good ties with others rather it is because there is a sense of competition in virtually every field whether it be technology, economy, or political. Similarly, Canada is a neighbour of America and the both countries America and Canada enjoying amicable ties with each other. If we take the example of Pakistan, we also keep the relation with our distant neighbour such as U.K and U.S.A. On the contrary, we also keep an eye on India in order to keep pace with this country. This is a global practice with which no nation can survive. No wonder what other countries do we are bound to have bonds with them. That is why this world is called global village. (Words 260)

The winds are always on the side of the ablest navigator

This proverb has deep meanings. Winds are not favorable to navigators.
Sea world always seem horrible. A common navigator can not compete with the heavy blow of sea winds. A skilled and experience navigator knows how to counter such difficulties in life. He knows how to manage sinking boat and pull back the tides of sea storm. His determined and manipulated mind make him able to fight against storm. A navigator becomes ablest over time and experience. he knows how to sail in the midst of unfavorable winds. in a nutshell, winds are on the side of the ablest navigator. storm is a general phenomenon of life. There is no short cut to come across without facing it."Bad times have a scientific value, these are occassions a good learner would not miss"(Ralph). If one has a fears of water he can not learn swimming.similarly, one has to be brave enough to fight every war even at the cost of his life.Sincere efforts never go wasted. The ability of man lies in grappling with difficulties courageously and coming out of them successfully. Navigation is a difficult art but not for those who have manipulation and skill in it.Life favors those who take challenges whole heartedly and make out them.One may say difficulties are knocked down by strong man. Ability appeared with strong efforts and dexterity to avert a disaster in life. One should aim at to face all the hurdles prevailing on his way.

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Please please check my outline:

Forests are the lungs of earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of world, currently we know. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Problem: deforestation
Time scope: present plus future
Place scope: Plant earth
Coining the name of essay:


“Perils of deforestation”
Outline:
1- Introduction:
After industrial revolution in 18th century, more land and natural resources became a prerequisite for economical and social growth of countries. Consequently it gave rise to indiscriminate deforestation and wasteful use of natural resources. On one hand more fuel produced more environmental hazards while on the other hand, forests, the moderators became increasingly thin. This resulted in pollution and general spread of diseases and much more disturbances for ecosystems. Thus trees are the lungs of planet, making it habitable for us.
2- Effects of deforestation:
i- Atmospheric filtering stopped
a- Pollution whether noise of dust will be rampant
b- Diseases will be widespread
ii- Co2 level will shoot up
a- Very densely clouded green house will be observed
b- Temperature will rise
c- Water level rise
d- Crop yield disturbed in terms of quality and quantity
e- Polar caps may melt and summer/ winter balance will be disturbed
f- Frozen mud in northern Canada and green-Land will be releasing trapped methane
g- Skin cancer will be increased probability disease
h- Species will be disappearing
iii- Sudden rise and fall of temperature at day and in night
a- Sudden rise and fall like deserts
b- Change in energy uses not per season, but per day
c- Will make life miserable
iv- Corrosion of earth
a- Woodless land under heavy rains cannot survive its fertile crust.
b- Useful salts will be flown away to sea
v- Habitats of species destroyed
a- Not only man but so many species will be disturbed
b- An overall massacre of wild life
c- Some species will become extinct
d- Surviving Wild life disturbed
vi- Forest resources get limited
a- So many natural resources like honeys, herbs, bark, fodder, wood will become insufficient
vii- Cultivated lands will become brittle
viii- Dams will start filling
a- First stage surface scratched
b- Second stage flown into dams
c- 3rd stage capacity will go down
Conclusion:
Forests are inevitably playing the same or even sophisticated role in sustaining life on planet earth, as compared to lungs in human body. With increasing deforestation man has hemmed himself in so many problems but his survival also has come under question. Thus to let the planet live and nourish in a natural course and harmony planting forests is necessary.

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Dear Lord thanks for your help.

Please seniors, Check my both expansions the previous and this one. Thanks in anticipation.

LOTS OF PEOPLE CONFUSE BAD MANAGEMENT WITH DESTINY

It has been observed that the lethargic people are usually pessimistic and unsuccessful. They don’t want to work hard in order to be successful. When they lose every opportunity due to their laziness the blame is put on the destiny and fate. Some people are very selfish in a sense that when they are successful, it is because of their hard work. Whereas when they are unsuccessful it is because of fate. Nobody even ponder upon the fact that hard work is a key to success. Westerns, say for example, are educated and developed. This is, as some people believe, because GOD has bestowed luxury life on them and they will have no reward in the hereafter. Nobody takes pains to think that this development of West is not because of anything save hard work. Conversely, if we see the status of Muslim Ummah, we would notice they are divided, underdeveloped, deprived and living miserable lives. They think it is their fate and they cannot do much to change this sorry state of affairs. Nobody looks back to the history to know that when the Muslims rulers were busy in having their Taj Mahal built, Europe was busy in establishing the top university of the world. How many universities were built in Muslim territories? The answer would virtually in negative. Now we think the miserable condition of Muslim is our fate. Nobody blames bad management of Muslim rulers. Conclusively, it is just ignorance fo the people to curse their fate. They need to understand that man always carve his own destiny through hard work and struggle. (Words 266)

Man probes into space but not into himself

Man has taken rapid strides towards the discovery of mysteries of space. he has gone to the space with the help of modern technology. Science has made everything accessible to human range.Many developed countries like US and other western countries are equipped with new technology, innovations and discoveries which widened the conscious of men.They are working for the disclosure of further mysteries.Today, science has enabled a man to go into the depth of ocean to space. they have inset their flag of dignity on moon. Many developing countries like Pakistan are lost in a web of poverty, hunger and corruption.They are suffering from financial crisis. A major portion of country s income is consumed on defence and debt recovering. there is a huge difference in per capita income of developing and developed countries.Man probes into space but he did not conquer evils in himself.He never tries to finish darkness prevailing himself. Modern science has failed to solve the problems related to spiritual life of a man. Many mystics and ulema laid down the stress upon self discovering. Man should probes himself to know the mysteries hidden himself. it is not an easy task.it contains a lot of complexity and rigidness. when man would have conqured himself he would be able to sort out all the evils exist in his personality. God has created mankind, all are different from each other not in physical appearance but also in emotions and sentiments. Man has limitized journey of disoveries to this materialistic world only.Man has always been passionate to conquer the world. He must pay attention to find out the world hidden in his personality.