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Besant describing the middle class of the 9th century wrote " In the first place it was for more a class apart. "In no sense did it belong to society. Men in professions of any kind (except in the Army and Navy) could only belong to society by right of birth and family connections; men in trade—bankers were still accounted tradesmen—could not possibly belong to society. That is to say, if they went to live in the country they were not called upon by the county families and in the town they were not admitted by the men into their clubs, or by ladies into their houses… The middle class knew its own place, respected itself, made its own society for itself, and cheerfully accorded to rank the deference due."

Since then, however, the life of the middle classes had undergone great changes as their numbers had swelled and their influence had increased.

Their already well –developed consciousness of their own importance had deepened. More critical than they had been in the past of certain aspects of aristocratic life, they wee also more concerned with the plight of the poor and the importance of their own values of society, thrift, hand work, piety and respectability thrift, hand work, piety and respectability as examples of ideal behavior for the guidance of the lower orders. Above all they were respectable. There were divergences of opinion as to what exactly was respectable and what was not. There were, nevertheless, certain conventions, which were universally recognized: wild and drunker behaviors were certainly not respectable, nor were godlessness or avert promiscuity, not an ill-ordered home life, unconventional manners, self-indulgence or flamboyant clothes and personal adornments.

TITLE: An up heaval phase of Middle-class / Transitional phase of middle class from apathy to social acceptance

In the 9th century, the status of middle-class was not as alluring as it got so. The people of rural and urban areas had not admitted their subsistence and regarded them as unfit to their gatherings. Consequently, they established their own morale-enriched society and the size of middle-class accentuated multiply. Eventually they scored deference in society on the basis of their values, devout, generosity, economical attitude & empathy towards indigent and hapless masses of the society. Coventionally, they were prone to dis-organized, fornication, unethical, atheism & illicit activities respectively; which were universally practiced so.

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Regards,
This is how it goes. In yours, there were many mistakes as regards wrong words usage, wrong comprehension of ideas, etc. Well, you rightly got the theme of the precis, which is really admirable.

TITLE: Transitional phase of middle class from social alienness to social recognition

In the 9th century, the status of middle class was not as influencing as it became later. People of earlier societies did not admit their subsistence and regarded them as unfit to their gatherings. Consequently, the middle class people established their own society with distinct values, which earned them respect and influence in the society. For they cared very much for values such as hard work, piety and thrift. Moreover, they guided the poor in following in such an ideal behaviour as theirs.Hence, life and values of the middle class have changed significantly over the years, especially with respect to their number and influence.

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