I have written on this topic. my introduction, history and 4 paragraph were relevant, but then i shifted on propblems of womensports persons. I wrote that problems of women sportsperson should be resolved, so that we can further project the soft image of pak.
In introduction, i wrote that participation of women arises out of the social economic and political rights that have been given to women. The perception about pakistan that it deprives women of the aforementioned rights has, thus, changed considerably. My introduction was detailed and comprehensive, but now, i am worried that why i mentioned "problems" so much detailed.

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