excellent man !!
i gave the similar intro
after that i stick to issues that womens of pakistan are known to be politically and socially subjugated but sportswoen have projected a new and good image.I remained confined to what sportswomen are projecting now :
i said that they are representing egalitarian society
they are representing a peacful society
they are represntng tolerant society and like wise gave the details of all these
what do u say??????
i am able to convince examiner................
i gave 9 headings for my essay in outline
i wrote 16 page essay.....

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