Raja :
I think you have focused more on women sports in Pakistan ....Ambassador of soft image was the real crunch of the topic according to my perception.
Well i think hamza has done commendable effort as he has maintained a balanced approach in tackling the topic....
In inroduction he has introduced women in sports and then how they are projectng a new image...
I think demand from the examiner included the following:
1.Present image of Pakistan in the world
2.how this image can be made positive
3.Women participation in sports
4.Why need for a good,positive image?
5.How sportswomen are projecting a new and better image?
6.Failures of other modes of projecting softer image and womens success
7.Impacts of women participation in international sports events.
I wish success for you guys
This is my personal perception.Disagrrement to it would be appreciated
HASEEB