Dear your effort is really nice , but i think you could add these points as well which are exclusively related to State of education in Pakistan ,
HEC issues
Ghost schools
mismanagement of existing funds
Advancement of decade old syllabus
Private schools fees structure ( this is current problem )
Tough punishment to non-responsible government school teachers
Militants bombing schools is also a serious issue
Finding solution to drop out reasons,which may be:

• parental attitude toward girls education
• sanitation issue
• schools are far away
• under trained or un trained staff