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Originally Posted by haiderm
2nd line: "this has lead to the dozen problems."
correct: This has led to dozens of problems.
4th line: "as nobody has given heed in evacuating the power from it"
if you are trying to say that nobody gave importance to generate power from it, then it clearly shows you are
trying to use heavy words for no reason or to impress the reader. Which creates a bad impression on readers.
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