Without prejudice

Good Effort

Outline is lose and not coherent.

In outlines

Avoid lengthy points.....rather chose compact words & restrict extra use of words

Headings and sub headings are not well disciplined

Give each Heading a Serial Number
Then its sub heading in sub-numbering as under :-

1.What is free speech?
a. Freedom of expressing ............
b. unchecked freedom ...................

2. freedom of speech is expressed through
a. public processions
b. electronic media
3.......................................so on and so forth...............


Don't ask questions like what is free speech?.................rather write only Free speech........ the examiner knows that you will define it in expansion..........


Don't be so descriptive in Outline. Only touch topics which you would expand later in essay.

Again full length lines in Outline are very risky as per my meager knowledge. It shows that you lack requisite English vocabulary for ant outline that you are using full length sentences in outline to express yourself.


You cannot put dots in between words as you have done unbridled criticism.........cause of political unrest
It would be a blunder in CSS Essay.

Never quote examples in outline as you have done.



Again good brainstorming but very sorry that it is not a very good outline due to long sentences.

Having said that, i am not an authority. I just expressed my opinion about an outline. I may be totally wrong here too. I tried once to share my views on essay writing in following post a well:-

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...ad-intros.html