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Originally Posted by Sania Kahn
Hi seniors, Kindly comment about my essay outline and give your precious suggestions. 
Topic : Country life is better than city life
1) Introduction
2) What is country life?
3) What is city life?
4) Country life is better than city life because ;
- close to the nature
- simplicity
- enough time for activities of life
- enough time for family
- less crimes
- less bomb blasts and terrorism
- a palace of peace
- a major contribution to state :
economic
social
political
- Unity, faith and discipline
- brotherhood
- healthy people in healthy atmosphere
- more greenery and trees
- balanced healthy diet
- balanced life
- more caring and loving
- neighborhood
- less use of resources
- pollution free
5) Country life in the light of famous ;
a) scholars
b) writers
c) poets
6) Negativity of city life
- pollution
- lack of time
- a lot of crimes
- terror everywhere
- a running clock
- no unity , no faith and no discipline
- traffic and pollution
- people with diseases
- overpopulation
- no life, no diet
- complex enough to make one sick
- excessive use of resources
7) Critical thinking on both ;
---> Country :
* negativity of country life
* steps and strategies to eradicate -ve aspects of country life
* Country life---------a heaven on earth
---> City :
* steps and strategies to eradicate -ve aspects of city life
* City life----------complex but not a hell
8) CONCLUSION.  |
some points i edited to make them correct...compare them
in introduction , very first you should say your thesis statement that country life is better than city life.
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this should be after 3rd heading..
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Country life in the light of famous ;
a) scholars
b) writers
c) poets
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Country life is better than city life because ;
- close to the nature
- simplicity and morally high (more caring and loving)
- enough time for family
- less crimes
- a palace of peace-almost no bomb blasts and terrorism
- contribution to state :
economically
socially
politically
- Unity, (faith and discipline- brotherhood-neighborhood)
- balanced healthy diet- healthy people in healthy atmosphere
- balanced life-enough time for activities of life
- pollution free - more greenery and trees
demerits of city life
- air and water pollution
- no time due to employments or less activities to enjoy life
- high rate of crimes
- more chances of terror ...don't use terror every where
- no unity , no faith and no discipline
- health problems -no life, no diet comes under its explanation and complex enough to make one sick too comes under its explanation
- overpopulation- traffic and people comes under its explanation
- misuse of resources