Hi seniors, Kindly comment about my essay outline and give your precious suggestions.

Topic : Country life is better than city life

1) Introduction
2) What is country life?
3) What is city life?
4) Country life is better than city life because ;
- close to the nature
- simplicity
- enough time for activities of life
- enough time for family
- less crimes
- less bomb blasts and terrorism
- a palace of peace
- a major contribution to state :
economic
social
political
- Unity, faith and discipline
- brotherhood
- healthy people in healthy atmosphere
- more greenery and trees
- balanced healthy diet
- balanced life
- more caring and loving
- neighborhood
- less use of resources
- pollution free

5) Country life in the light of famous ;
a) scholars
b) writers
c) poets

6) Negativity of city life
- pollution
- lack of time
- a lot of crimes
- terror everywhere
- a running clock
- no unity , no faith and no discipline
- traffic and pollution
- people with diseases
- overpopulation
- no life, no diet
- complex enough to make one sick
- excessive use of resources

7) Critical thinking on both ;

---> Country :
* negativity of country life
* steps and strategies to eradicate -ve aspects of country life
* Country life---------a heaven on earth

---> City :
* steps and strategies to eradicate -ve aspects of city life
* City life----------complex but not a hell

8) CONCLUSION.

Nice and well balanced approach. Keep it up and you should use few words like "lack of time" or "running clock" instead you can use Hustle and bustle of daily life.Similarly, instead of "enough time" you can use "adequate". Don't use dual points having same meaning.

actually it was my first essay according to css pattern ever

some points i edited to make them correct...compare them

in introduction , very first you should say your thesis statement that country life is better than city life.
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this should be after 3rd heading..
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Country life in the light of famous ;
a) scholars
b) writers
c) poets
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Country life is better than city life because ;
- close to the nature
- simplicity and morally high (more caring and loving)
- enough time for family
- less crimes
- a palace of peace-almost no bomb blasts and terrorism
- contribution to state :
economically
socially
politically
- Unity, (faith and discipline- brotherhood-neighborhood)
- balanced healthy diet- healthy people in healthy atmosphere
- balanced life-enough time for activities of life
- pollution free - more greenery and trees

demerits of city life
- air and water pollution
- no time due to employments or less activities to enjoy life
- high rate of crimes
- more chances of terror ...don't use terror every where
- no unity , no faith and no discipline
- health problems -no life, no diet comes under its explanation and complex enough to make one sick too comes under its explanation
- overpopulation- traffic and people comes under its explanation
- misuse of resources

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when you walk towards destination , it is not you going near to that but that itself coming towards you...By me

Thank you , a better selection of words is needed