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Originally Posted by ch fakhar View Post
some points i edited to make them correct...compare them

in introduction , very first you should say your thesis statement that country life is better than city life.
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this should be after 3rd heading..
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Country life in the light of famous ;
a) scholars
b) writers
c) poets
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Country life is better than city life because ;
- close to the nature
- simplicity and morally high (more caring and loving)
- enough time for family
- less crimes
- a palace of peace-almost no bomb blasts and terrorism
- contribution to state :
economically
socially
politically
- Unity, (faith and discipline- brotherhood-neighborhood)
- balanced healthy diet- healthy people in healthy atmosphere
- balanced life-enough time for activities of life
- pollution free - more greenery and trees

demerits of city life
- air and water pollution
- no time due to employments or less activities to enjoy life
- high rate of crimes
- more chances of terror ...don't use terror every where
- no unity , no faith and no discipline
- health problems -no life, no diet comes under its explanation and complex enough to make one sick too comes under its explanation
- overpopulation- traffic and people comes under its explanation
- misuse of resources
Thank you , a better selection of words is needed
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