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Old Thursday, February 26, 2015
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Originally Posted by waqas izhar View Post
Here is one. Criticize ruthlessly, guide gently
nineteen paragraphs and about 1200-1400 words


1. Introduction
1.1. Labor saving devices are more productive than they are worth

2. Body
2.1. What are labor saving devices? They are machines.

2.2. Why machines are more productive
2.2.1. They save time.
2.2.2. They are efficient.
2.2.3. They minimize errors.
2.2.4. They provide employment opportunities.
2.2.5. They propel research and development.
2.2.6. They organized the social structure.

2.3. How machines are more productive
2.3.1. They spare time for recreational and spiritual activities.
2.3.2. They increased output per unit.
2.3.3. They overcame the nuisance of redoing things.
2.3.4. They increased income and prosperity.
2.3.5. They increased knowledge.
2.3.6. They simplified administration of cities and countries.

2.4. Comparison
2.4.1. Agricultural societies vs Industrial Societies
2.4.2. Wool spinning vs textile mills

2.5. Recommendation
2.5.1. Replace old methods of production with modern methods of production.
2.5.2. Invest in new machines.

3. Conclusion
3.1. Labor saving devices are more productive than they are worth.
Though I agree with you that one could go against any topic but you have redefined the topic.The opposite of "troublesome" is not necessarily "productive".You could have simply said that the labour saving devices were not more troublesome than they were worth.Nevertheless, your approach to your own chosen direction of essay is pragmatic, and I hope you pass the exam.
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