Originally Posted by Zohaa

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Just the other day I came across outline for essay entitled "Future of democracy in Pakistan". As I am also working on my writing skills these days so I also tried. Here it is, Seniors assess this outline and highlight the deficiencies and give suggestions for improvement


Future of Democracy in Pakistan

Outlinne

Introduction

Basis and foundation of Democracy
Roots of democracy embedded deep in South Asia
Democracy – an imperative element of Pakistan ideology
System of Government in Pakistan
Geostrategic location of Pakistan
Pakistan – an ideological democratic state
Constitutional system of government
Military Coups and Marshal law
Non-military interventions
Dwindling and infirm democracy

Contemporary scenario
Future outlook

Intimidation to Democracy
1. Illiteracy and backwardness of masses
2. Feudalism
3. Unawareness of communities
4. Vulnerable government institutions
5. Grievances among provinces
6. External threats and terrorism
7. Precarious law and order situation
8. Passiveness of folks
9. Incompetent and indifferent government
10. Economic restraints
11. Racism and sectarianism
12. Ethnic disputes
13. Relations with neighboring countries
14. Menace of unemployment
15. Corruption and in transparency prevails
16. Energy crises and water disputes
17. Incapable judiciary
18. Injustice and broken law and order condition
19. Supremacy of bureaucracy
20. Military intrusion in state affairs
21. Thwarted progress

Outcome of unstable democratic apparatus

Proposals and recommendations for furtherance
1. Strong and genuine leadership
2. Parity among provinces
3. Consciousness and mindfulness of communities
4. Plausible foreign policy
5. Social and economic uplift
6. Say no to marshal law
7. Role and responsibility of media
8. Eradication of terrorism
9. Confiscation and amputation of corruption
10. Revoke medieval social system
11. Proliferation of education
12. Dismiss insecurities on part of countrymen
13. Predomination of Peace and harmony
14. Positive attitude

Road of democracy
Radiant and sparkling future of democracy

Conclusion