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Originally Posted by nhpaki
brother danyal , i dont contend with all what u explained, but can u plz single out the mistakes i made in three of the sentences i tried to correct
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brother Naveed, I have a great value for ur objections.....onething u must remember that when you r asked to correct the sentence...u dont have to change the basic structure of the sentence.....try to figure out the syntax errors. Now u see u have written, for example, " may i have" to replace 'can' whereas u could only have written 'may' to suffice.
In another sentence u have inserted 'only' instead of 'such..............as have'......now u can urself judge that after correction the word wise structure of the sentece remained same. Brother whenever u correct any sentence ..try to keep its structure intact, as much as possible; but if still the labyrinths did not yield, then only u can go for little changes.
in the other sentence u have ommitted the words ' if not beeter than' altogether. Now u urself decide this.
anyway, brother as i have already told u that i m not an authority...if u find anything better than this, do tell me too...and the others also...we r all here to learn..and share.....no one claims to be the Master of All They Survey.
Regards,