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Originally Posted by asma mehvish
terrorism
outline
1-introduction (Write one or two lines in intro para while writing outline: The things you have mentioned below before 4th headings, summarize them in introduction para. No need to discuss them separately)
a-conventional wisdom views such as - terrorism and poverty
- unemployment and terrorism
- low education status and terrorism
- poverty crime and terrorism
(These are consequences of terrorism. Discuss them after causes)
3- modern study of terrorism
a-Grager investigation about terrorism
b-evidences of Alan krueger - more educated and wealthier family young recruited as terrorist
- terrorism is political phenomenon not economy
- political oppression drive people toward terrorism
(Discuss these briefly under causes heading or after causes)
4- Thesis Statement (Now define here your thesis statement and extend the argument you have mentioned below)
Pakistan present situations and what we need to do? ( Mold this into your thesis statement)
7- present concept of terrorism ( Does not suit here. Adjust it somewhere around intro))
8- Muslims condition and hypocrisy of west
9- anti Islamic caricatures
10- Kashmir and Myanmar issue and US criminal silence
11- involvement of Pakistan in US so-called terrorism war 12- consequences of these war for Pakistan
5- origin of jihadi culture or Taliban ( US used the Muslim world
6 - Taliban tagged as terrorist ( Adjust them in causes and effects) or you can explain them just after intro.All in one paragraph.
13- operation zarb-e-azb is fruit of this war ( Add it near conclusion)
14- Pakistan become sandwich between afghan and Indian border (No need of this)
15 - interference of RAW in Pakistani affairs (Totally irrelevant)
16- future of war on terror ( No need of separate heading. Discuss it in second last paragraph if necessary)
17-analysis (No need of this heading)
18-solution (Discuss just after causes)
19 conclusion
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(Add one to two lines here)
Follow the following pattern for initial practice.
1. Intro
2. Thesis
3. Current Scenario and Case Studies
4. Causes
5. Effects
6. Solution
7. Conclusion
Below is the revised version of your essay outline.
These are the main heads you discussed so all these should be elaborated separately.
Introduction
What is terrorism?
Islamic Perspective
Terrorism: Present and Past
Root causes of terrorism
Effects of terrorism
Ways to combat terrorism
Conclusion
Detailed description
Introduction
What is terrorism? (Definitions + Quotations from different journals)
Islamic Perspective
Quranic Verses
Ahadith
Islamic History
Terrorism: Present and Past (Describe it in one or 2 paragraphs but if you have good material then you can go for sub-headings as well)
Root causes of terrorism
Social and political injustice
Extremism
Lack of Education (low literacy rate)
Extremism and ethnicity
Historical antecedents of political violence
Poverty, Inflation and Economic downturn
Non-democratic government
Militancy and Anti inter-religion harmony sentiments
Lack of tolerance
Effects of terrorism
Political instability
Psychological Stress
Poverty and unemployment
Minimal FDI (Foreign Direct Investment)
Maximum International borrowings (Loans)
Ways to combat terrorism
Dialogue: A course to combat terrorism
Vigilant check on religious and social clerics
Empowered Anti-money laundering Procedures
Media Support to propagate anti-terrorism sentiments
Secure defense mechanism
Conclusion
P.S: This topic is so simple too be prepared for CSS Exams. Choose topic from CSS Past Papers next time as you are going to sit in the competitive examination that requires advance level and skills.
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