Originally Posted by Aik Admi

Dear Nation Builder,

I am suggesting that when you write an essay, better to make it somewhat critical. That entails discussing the good and the bad sides, both, of something but substantiating through strong arguments and evidence why you favour one of the propositions in comparison to the other. E.g. It would be a good idea to discuss the merits of country life briefly too, but showing later why the city life is still way better. Also Google 'Critical Writing'

I just saw that you Have discussed the merits of country life briefly at the end of your essay. So we are already on the same page !