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Old Wednesday, September 30, 2015
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The purpose of an essay is to make a point which is not very obvious. In your case you have mostly focused your efforts on incorporating difficult words in your essay. For a more balanced essay I suggest you work on your grammar and try to write simple English. Good luck!
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