Brother,do not get discouraged by the virulent criticism of the these worthy members.keep it up.You have an impressive style,maintain it but yes there is always room for improvement.you should also focus on that area,and be specific and to the point when you are conveying something.there is no need to be fussy about particulars.you are just required to state your point of view objectively and precisely....keep on writing and lastly,always write in a defined domain.keep on working hard.