my dear brother safeer, your work, way of contextualizing the ideas and amalgamating the global,national-individual perspectives are worth appreciating. i agree with cognito's suggestion instead of giving Ambani as entrepreneur; you should include life of Prophet Muhammad's life and Nelson or M.K luther. one more suggestion; i could be wrong but i felt little attractiveness in words of outline. make phrases of outlines more catchy and attention-getter. so reader or examiner can feel the enthusiastic compulsion to find out more in your essay.