Grammatical mistakes

Pakistan has been fighting in the war on terror for the last one and a half decade. Having been a non-NATO ally she has confronted with militancy. Militant groups such as Talibans, Al-Qaida & ISIS have been enemies of our country. According to the militant groups, Pakistan is deemed pro-American and pro-enemy of Muslim-e-Ummah. As a matter of fact, the drone attacks have not only devastated terrorists, but hordes of innocent people have been killed. It has destabilized the whole South Asia and world politics.

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As a matter of fact, drone attacks have not only devastated terrorists but hordes of innocent people have been killed. It has destabilized the whole South Aisa and world politics. On account of such scenario, the militant groups incite their innocent people in Afghanistan, Pakistan, Egypt and Syria to fight with Pakistan army & western world.
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On account of such scenario, the militant groups incite their innocent people in Afghanistan, Pakistan, Egypt and Syria to fight with Pakistan army & western world. On the other hand, India, who is one of the biggest enemies of Pakistan, since its inception, is trying her best to destabilize our country. She has been a supportive source to incite Balouch rebellions & militant groups. She does not miss any chance to fuel the fire. Recent attack in France is a case in point that was also depicted to nexus with Pakistan by India. On account of this scenario Pakistan is passing from a very sensitive epic, due to unwanted militancy in Pakistan, many innocent people have been killed

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It is the need of the hour to take considerable steps to root out terrorism from Pakistan

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