Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

you tried to capture your outline, but you did not explain the things in a good manner.start with a narration is good and creative, but example lacks color and beauty. 'These influence individuals in may ways, and to tackle the unevenness due to this, humans try to keep balance between anticipation and realization by reducing the gap between both. 'use 'they' instead of these, you should have written the sentence like '' they influence individuals in many ways, so, for avoiding resultant imbalance, humans try to reduce the gap between anticipation and realization'. my sentence is also not looking standard please try to change this one,its not making sense.