Anticipation is Often Greater than Realization
Introduction

Mr. A woke up early in the morning with the anticipation of achieving a big feast when his company will struck million dollars deal with its rival. However, when the deal was realized, Mr. A's company took only a small portion of benefits as its rival took majority of the profits. Why is it so that humans anticipate more from something than its realization? Human nature has the answer to this question. Humans anticipate greater than realization due to their past experiences, the joy associated with anticipating more, and the higher expectations from outcomes. Consequently, such tendency are replicated in many aspects of their lives. It is not only present in today's life but the politics, wars, culture, traditions, and literature of the past also depicts that anticipation was often greater than realization. Greater anticipation also produces several consequences ranging from positive to negative ones. These influence individuals in may ways, and to tackle the unevenness due to this, humans try to keep balance between anticipation and realization by reducing the gap between both. Humans always try to do so, but every next time they ponder over something they again anticipate more than the realization of the outcome. This is simply because anticipation if often greater than realization.

Wrote it in a hurry. I know it is not good. But point out the structural and grammatical mistakes in this introduction.

you tried to capture your outline, but you did not explain the things in a good manner.start with a narration is good and creative, but example lacks color and beauty. 'These influence individuals in may ways, and to tackle the unevenness due to this, humans try to keep balance between anticipation and realization by reducing the gap between both. 'use 'they' instead of these, you should have written the sentence like '' they influence individuals in many ways, so, for avoiding resultant imbalance, humans try to reduce the gap between anticipation and realization'. my sentence is also not looking standard please try to change this one,its not making sense.

Thanks a lot. I got my errors.
What do you think about the idea of writing all of the outline in introduction? Is it okay or does it look weird?

__________________
Best of Luck.

do not write all of your outline in introduction; you may discuss all the same ideas but with different and attractive words. using the same words or theme may show lack of words and ideas, which you do not lack at all.

Anticipation is often greater than realization

Introduction

Hope or anticipation is the driving force of life on earth. Man is alive because he hopes; it is the expectation of greater realization of dreams that every individual, society and state works and plans for future even when the chances of success are bleak. The whole life is about struggle for greater realization. People make relations, love bonds, invest money in business, and try hard to achieve higher status; all in pursuit of a life happier and richer than the one that exists. But after reaching their desired points they get that their dreams were wonderlands and realities cannot be as much beautiful as expected. People anticipate a perfect result of an effort but perfection is nearly impossible. Dreams and ideas, when realized, always deliver less than the expectations; the industrial revolution was seen as a great hope for alleviation of poverty and work load, when realized, it made the life a struggle for power. However, low level of realization does not mean disappointment but it is a reflection that tells us how far we have to go to achieve our purpose. Greater hopes and lesser realization most often work as a motivation for more efforts for greater gains.

A.Anticipation for greater results drive the emotions of people

1. Life is a struggle for greater realization; dreaming and then looking for them coming true.

2. Man works because he is driven by the force of greater results; hope sustains the expectations of a life better than the one that exists.


B.Hope for greater realization is often living in a wonder land

1. Realization is not as much beautiful as it is dreamed of

2. No status and position deliver as much happiness and leisure as expected out of it


3. Realization can never be perfect; every new result comes with some indispensable problems.

C.Lower level of realization makes life a consistent anticipation for better days

1. Humans always hope a better life in future.

2. United Nations’ work for peace; though the chances are bleak, the anticipation survives.


3. A realization, lower than expectation, make the people more motivated for efforts.

D.Never the realization met the standards of anticipation

1. United Nations delivered lesser than that was expected from it

2. Democracy, in Pakistan, was thought a panacea, but it changed nothing.


3. Campaigns for women empowerment could not save women from tortures and injustices to which they are subjected.

4. People hoped that being nuclear would secure Pakistan, realization of hope was nil.


5. After meeting the desired goal, a man realizes that his desire was a utopia; results were much less than his desired.
E. Lesser level of realization shows that how much we still have to work

1. it tells us how much more work we still have to do

2. After getting lesser results world organizations, nations and people do not give up but work with greater hopes.


f.Greater hopes and lesser realization make the world optimistic; it brings better and much better to the society.

Conclusion

please,analyse, criticise and assess it.i will be grateful for your help

Introduction

Hope or anticipation(Hope is a nice synonym but bring it in the second line of your intro as you have to start with your main key word) is the driving force of life on earth. Man is alive because he hopes; it is the expectation of greater realization of dreams that every individual, society and state works and plans for future even when the chances of success are bleak. (Nice explanation to the topic sentence) The whole life is about struggle for greater realization. People make relations, love bonds, invest money in business, and try hard to achieve higher status; all in pursuit of a life happier and richer than the one that exists. But after reaching their desired points they get that their dreams were wonderlands and realities cannot be as much beautiful as expected. People anticipate a perfect result of an effort but perfection is nearly impossible. Dreams and ideas, when realized, always deliver less than the expectations; the industrial revolution was seen as a great hope for alleviation of poverty and work load, (however), when realized, it made the life a struggle for power. (But), low level of realization does not mean disappointment (as) it is a reflection that tells us how far we have to go to achieve our purpose. Greater hopes and lesser realization most often work as a motivation for more efforts for greater gains.
Very good introduction i guess. I just recommended few the grammatical corrections.
A.Anticipation for greater results drive the emotions of people

1. Life is a struggle for greater realization; dreaming and then looking for them coming true.

2. Man works because he is driven by the force of greater results; hope sustains the expectations of a life better than the one that exists.


B.Hope for greater realization is often living in a wonder land

1. Realization is not as much beautiful as it is dreamed of

2. No status and position deliver as much happiness and leisure as expected out of it


3. Realization can never be perfect; every new result comes with some indispensable problems.

C.Lower level of realization makes life a consistent anticipation for better days

1. Humans always hope a better life in future.

2. United Nations’ work for peace; though the chances are bleak, the anticipation survives.


3. A realization, lower than expectation, make the people more motivated for efforts.

D.Never the realization met the standards of anticipation ( The realizations never meet the standards of anticipation)

1. United Nations delivered lesser than that was expected from it

2. Democracy, in Pakistan, was thought a panacea, but it changed nothing.


3. Campaigns for women empowerment could not save women from tortures and injustices to which they are subjected.

4. People hoped that being nuclear would secure Pakistan, realization of hope was nil.


5. After meeting the desired goal, a man realizes that his desire was a utopia; results were much less than his desired.
E. Lesser level of realization shows that how much we still have to work

1. it tells us how much more work we still have to do

2. After getting lesser results world organizations, nations and people do not give up but work with greater hopes.


f.Greater hopes and lesser realization make the world optimistic; it brings better and much better to the society.

Conclusion

With this essay, you would have definitely cleared essay paper. Keep it up.

__________________
Best of Luck.

Anticipation is often Greater than realization

" People who have no hold over their process of thinking are likely to be ruined by liberty of thought. If thought is immature, liberty of thought becomes a method of turning men into animal"


ALLAMA IQBAL
Outline:
Introduction:

a) Definition of Anticipation
b) Anticipation as a potent power
c) Nature of Anticipation
d) Quality of Anticipation
e) Realization and its interconnection with Anticipation

1) Wisdom oriented Anticipation fetches comfort realization

1.1) Vision oriented Anticipation as a family member, society, individual, skill labour, engineer, doctor or an Architect.
1.2) Great leader’s anticipation promotes social justice and economic well-being in the state.
1.3) Allama Iqbal and his anticipation for Muslims
1.4) Qaudi-e-Azam and his vision for the great state of Pakistan
1.5) Britain`s unwritten constitution since decades is the result of Greater Anticipation
1.6) Positive anticipation ensures healthy socio-economic environment

2) Lack of vision exceeds the anticipation and produces discomfort realization

2.1) US and its allies invasion of Iraq
2.2) Invasion of Afghanistan by US and Soviet Union
2.3) Apology and realization of former British Prime Minister Tony Blair on Iraq war
2.4) Poor strategy to harness natural disasters, climate change and loss of human lives
2.5) Failure to eliminate poverty, corruption and economic justice

3) Weak anticipation serves as a fruitful Realization

2.1) Realization as a lesson
2.2) Realization as a mitigating tool
2.3) Learn to understand not to repeat same flaw
2.4) Experience of realization could be used for better anticipation
2.5) Realization is considered a last resort of anticipation

4) How to strengthen Greater anticipation than undone realization?

3.1) Contemplation and pondering is the best way to realize own-self
3.2) Anticipating to embrace change for greater cause than repentance in the end.
3.3) Educating own-self should be preliminary task to enhance greater anticipation
3.4) Positivity of thoughts must be ensured for greater anticipation.
3.5) Anticipation is greater when realization has already been judged through others.

Conclusion

Summary
Anticipation is Greater than realization

thank you so very much for this detailed analysis. I got 65 in the essay , in PMS exam. lets see what happens in CSS.this is my last and final struggle for induction in this system , i left no stone unturned in preparation but they failed me by 1 mark in sociology. my grand total was 676 , with 32 in sociology. 65 essay, 54 in composition, 46 and 48 in CA and PA respectively. 65 in Islamiyat and 69 in EDS. luck factor counts very much.

I am really sorry for you brother. Ah! Just one mark. Missing something like this by one mark hurts brother, and this makes a person mad at himself and at examiner too. Did you really attempt sociology paper badly? Have you given only one attempt? If not then what about other attempts and their scores?

@Bonaparte.
The theme of your outline has added a new angle to the discussion. You meant, while agreeing to the fact that anticipation is often greater than realization, that several forms of anticipations determine whether the realization will be good or not. Is this really what you wanted to show in your outline? I think your thesis statement, according to your outline, should have been that " several forms of anticipations, which often being greater than realization, produces either comfortable or uncomfortable realizations.
And the last part of undone realization confused me. Can you clarify what did it mean?

__________________
Best of Luck.

I was expecting more than 50 in sociology, 32 was a big shock because sociology was never difficult for me. 2013 was my first attempt and in that I failed in essay securing 25 marks , the grand total was 525.