NOT ECONOMY, BUT POLITICS IS THE KEY TO SUCCESS

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Introduction:

In the pursuit of happiness and success, politics has an advantage over economy. a good thesis statment

[A] The broad concept of success, beyond the measure of wealth and riches:


[B] Comparison of politics and economy in terms of their ability to yield success:

1- Politics has a wider scope than economy, thus its capacity to bring success is also greater.

2- Politics incorporate reliable tools, (negotiations and participation) to reach at a solution. Whereas, economy use taxes, interests and loans which may backfire. excellent

3- Political gains are real and sustainable. But economic achievements are mere numbers and often deceptive. good idea

4- Politics protect the weak and the most vulnerable. Economy, ironically, believes in the survival of the fittest. excellent

5- If economy is a "zero-sum game", then politics is a positive sum game. zabardast approach

6- Economy is in fact a hurdle to successfully deal with environmental and climatic issues. Only politics can provide assurance of success at this frontier. convincing point

7- Even for individuals, politics is a gateway to success because political leaders are regarded as heros while economists are often seen with suspicion.

[C] Policy implications of the above findings: change this heading it's not clearly giving your message,not looking good

1- Political reforms first; Econmic reforms later. good job

2- Politics must dictate the economy and not otherwise.

3- A crown is not a cure for headache.

Conclusion:

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